do you agree or disagree with the following statement? because modern life is very complex, it is essential for our young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Planning out every step beforehand is one of the most crucial factors of prosperity. People who have a predetermined schedule and act according to the clock most often accomplish their goals. Some people assert that in contemporary days that young people face perplexing and intricate complexities, it is of vital importance that our young are taught to acquire the capability of planning and act by timetable. From my vantage point, I believe that time is only a matter of perspective and thorough history all prosperous people would bring themselves to act as planned.
To begin with, time is like a river flown in one direction. Once the time is lost, it can not be restored. Nowadays, time has become even shorter for many people who reside in modern big cities. Meaning that they have to work against the clock to achieve their dreams. Although it is never too late to make a change, there will not be a time in the future that compares now.
Secondly. Our young, however, are wasting their time in every way available. Most of them watching inefficient TV programs and chatting with smartphones. This pointless style of living makes them not only lose time but also neglect time. If our children are not being taught that to plan their future and value their time, they will most likely be incompetent and incapable of making any decision and plan for their future.
At last, looking at this issue from a psychology pair of lenses. It can be realized that many people who have traded their time with leisure and comfort ended up desperate, asking for aid from others. people who spend a poor and fractured senility used to ignore the virtue and mortal aspect of youth.
All in all, according to the aforementioned reasons, one could realize that time does not wait for anyone to catch up and while we are facing the competitiveness of the new era, it is indispensable to make our children adapt themselves with organizing and acting by the plan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... desperate, asking for aid from others. people who spend a poor and fractured senility...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61824791723 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7482752115 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161129132441 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521615658604 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430859915753 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093854073973 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217387344126 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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