do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict
Since the dawn of civilization, constitutions are enforced to communities to bring peace and safety in societies. Many of these laws prevent people from committing a wrong action. However, a controversial question which is often raised regarding the issue that whether or not governments try to emphasize more on younger people to obey the law has provoked controversy among people. I to a considerable extent hold the viewpoint that based on several reasons younger people are more inclined to cross the laws. governments by knowing these facts are more passionate to impose severe verdicts for juveniles.
To commence with, it is generally agreed that young people are more likely to disobey the law since they are more curious and dynamic. People in the age of youth tend to try new things that they have not tasted before. Take an agile adult person for example, despite knowing the fact that there are speed limitation laws, they still neglect this law by driving fast because they are eager to experience the fast speed.
A second equally significant reason is concerned with the fact that governments usually would rather implement strict countering on young people to detain such actions from repetition than by ignoring such delinquencies result in adaptation. People of younger age are adapting themselves with some experience and knowledge they acquire. Therefore, when they are restricted from doing a mistake, it would be improbable they act the same.
At last, although laws are defined for every individual the same, young people are more expected to receive harsher accusations and treatment. This is because they should feel threatened, so that they respect the rules more often. Older people, on the other hand, are either spending jail time because they refused to change their lifestyle as an outlaw or they are adapted to obey the law.
All in all, according to the aforementioned reasons which are the prevention of crime from happening again and the curiosity of a younger age, one could realize that some laws are expected to be performed on juvenile people more firmly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...s often raised regarding the issue that whether or not governments try to emphasize more on yo...
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Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
...le are more inclined to cross the laws. governments by knowing these facts are more passion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13994169096 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68449009925 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.08030501 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.533333333 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125515998339 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455660624117 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359039530209 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719735372027 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229153673004 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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