do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
it is obvious that people have a more complicated life than the past, and they have to do many things by themselves. As far as I am concerned, it is not far from the imagination that they are acting good only in few of them. I will develop my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one should take into account that these days people are dealing with a hectic life. Moreover, the hours in a day that can be used is too limited, and tasks that should be fulfilled are a handful. Therefore, everybody just tries to do things, and the quality pales in comparison to the significance of quantity. For instance, a person who is a student, has a part time job, and lives alone needs to do many things in a day. All of these responsibilities follow by different jobs: studying and doing assignments, job tasks, house chores. If the person wants to meet his schedule, he cannot concentrate on the quality of all these items. As a result, a little of those things will be done in a great way.
Another noteworthy reason that should be mentioned is that people have different level of talents. Additionally, they differ from each other regarding the capabilities they have. it is generally accepted that not all humans are alike mentally, and they cannot perform with the same quality. To be more specific, some people are talented in physical skills, some are good at intellectual areas, and some people require to put more effort on their activities than others. For example, a teacher in her class observes many students with different abilities, and does her best to teach them well, but only few of them are considered as brilliant minds. This is because people have different abilities and no can be good in everything.
To wrap it up, I am of the opinion that being busy during the day make people do only some of their tasks in a good way because they have limited time and they are not equally talented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64139941691 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63501051912 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1403454255 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302599586189 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888184361108 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606658703768 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185277774677 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147326333161 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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