Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is critically important that people have a satisfactory life, which makes them happy and causes them to have a good feeling about themselves. Personally, I believe today’s people are experiencing the happiest era during the whole history. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, talking about past people's attitudes about life is doubtful because we do not know about their real feeling, so it is hard for me to believe they were happier than us. Throughout history, we will find out during all the epochs, people were not satisfied, and they were in a struggle with themselves by objection about life and protest to their governments and fighting with each other. In a small case, takes an individual's life as an example. People always have something to be upset about from childhood to adulthood, so they never experience true happiness from the bottom of their hearts. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I was unhappy all over my life; it did not matter what my problem was. If I consider my life, I will say I was the reason for my sadness. Human beings are seeking issues unintentionally to make them unsatisfied.
Furthermore, today's life is easier than before and provides people with many facilities, which make them happy and causes various sorts of satisfaction. In the past, people had to do more physical work than today so that their subsistence needs to be reached. They were also suffering from lots of diseases, which were causing their children and their own death. But in this modern era, with the explosion of technology, people do not have to work hard physically, and the rate of death by diseases has become lower, which makes the people have a long, happy life more than in any era. For instance, my grandmother, who is alive, always talks about the difficulties they had to tolerate to have a bath or make food.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that today's life is far happier and satisfaction for people than in the past. This is because we do not know about past's people attitudes to life to state how happy they were, and by today's modern life and plenty of facilities, life is more pleasant than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...h each other. In a small case, takes an individuals life as an example. People always have ...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'tolerate having'.
Suggestion: tolerate having
...alks about the difficulties they had to tolerate to have a bath or make food. In conclusion,...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...In conclusion, I am of the opinion that todays life is far happier and satisfaction fo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76288659794 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66566621772 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510309278351 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5409462059 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223177858604 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762510059862 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648101551014 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149258256136 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466581678755 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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