Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully.
creativities and planning are two indispensable part of problem solving. Some people believe that to find a solution people should have innovative ability, however some people believe that have an accurate plan plays more important role than being creative. I subscribe to the belief that having an organized planning is more important. I feel this way because of two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, in this competitive world, planning is an integral part of success. in our everyday life, we encounter various hindrances that need precise planning to overcome it. These plans are divided into two parts. A part of human's planning is short-term and another part is long-term. To reach the goal in either of two parts, we need to organize our time, energy, resources, and etc. Consider an employee of the company as an example. In order to reach the position of management, he needs to have five basic abilities and first one of them is goal setting and planning. it should be stressed that creativity of finding a proper solution for a difficulty is not in the list of essential abilities that an eminent management should possess.
More importantly, a person is able to buy genius thoughts and products. However, the capability of planning is priceless and even if someone hires a person to plan for him, stickiness to the plan is an inborn characteristic since people cannot buy it in the labor market. As a personal example, I am a confounder of a startup named Igreg which is a platform for students to have a constant access to the tutors. We have two employees in our staff working as problem-solver in our company. If an issue occurs in the procedure of the daily work or if we want to promote our product, their job is to start brainstorming and provide us the best solution as possible. Admittedly, planning to reach any goal is my responsibility.
In a nutshell, I believe that having the ability of planning is more important than thinking out of the box.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81948424069 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86667017346 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.307056593 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5263157895 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201903204384 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608650894965 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053645627095 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143345244061 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530881644442 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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