Do you agree or disagree? It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
First and foremost, during elderly, people are in a proper financial situation. Money is a hinder of many activities in the world. People between the ages of 18 to 24 years old since they are in the way of obtaining university degree have free time to visit their wished countries. However, they are not in a stable situation and their low income would not afford to travel abroad. As a personal example, I have always wished to visit Manchester in Britain. I have vested interest in this city because of visiting Old Trafford which is the stadium of Manchester United, my favorite football team. I planned for it and even did some evaluation to predict the cost of the trip. The cost is somehow equivalent to the income of two years full-time job. Nevertheless, reaching this goal in the old age is not impossible.
Secondly, at the 50s people have less responsibility. According to the evidence, eighty percent of people in the world have a full-time job. They are not independent and work as an employee. It means that they should shoulder various responsibilities in their workplace. Even if they have their own company, their responsibility about their families and partner are another hindrance. Since older people are retired, they have a fewer task to conduct in their daily activities. Furthermore, youngsters have less spare time since they need to do be updated always. Since we are living in a competitive world, they are obliged to enhance their knowledge to secure their job. As a designer, for instance, searching on the Pinterest is an inseparable part of my routine. It assists me to grasp latest trends of designing. No matter how much effort I put to save money, I cannot neglect my responsibilities to take a week off.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that ages between ages of 50 to 80 are the most proper time to visit various countries. In these ages, humans have more spare time to devote it for traveling abroad. Furthermore, after retirement, you don’t need to care about your financial situation and responsibilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89398280802 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92537093238 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4903591979 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2608695652 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0612085548948 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168592737028 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255311281227 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551578619034 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389998719096 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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