Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in life are free. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Everything must have a value or cost. Most of the times, “Free” term relates to something that has no monetary cost, thus no money spent to acquire it. While many people spend lots of cash to get many good things in life, some people argue that they come at no cost. Health and happiness are the ultimate goal of human’s life, and I personally believe these do not always come free for some ways.
People might take different efforts and resources in order to become healthy. Regular visit to a doctor is one. People have to allocate their time and energy to meet their doctors and pay the doctor fees and prescriptions. Many people become a fitness club member to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Besides the monthly membership fee, they would also want to buy supplements and other supporting nutrients foods. Furthermore, if people choose to neglect the healthy lifestyle, they would suffer much bigger costs in the long run. For example, serious illness would require them to be hospitalized, and thus are not cheap.
There are many ways to achieve happiness. Youth people love to hang with their friends to cheer their emotions. They could watch some movies with some friends during weekend or they could go to a bar with some colleagues after office work to release stress. Parents would need to arrange a holiday trip to cherish their kids. Domestic or international travel would require several costs components like transportation, accommodation and other itinerary costs. Even people who prefer to stay at home during weekend must consider the electricity costs that used for TVs and Air Conditioners.
People sometimes fail to recognize the direct and indirect costs in their daily life. Moreover, they also often forget the monetary costs like time and energy that are used for their desired things. In conclusion, everything on this planet has a cost. People might have to spend some cash for directly purchasing the desired stuff or consider the indirect costs associated with the products or services they consume, like in the case of TVs and Air Conditioners.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268542199488 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.156010230179 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358056265985 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0843989769821 0.118717715034 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0179028132992 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63700886321 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0537084398977 0.0309702414327 173% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.079283887468 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281329923274 0.0209618222197 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0076726342711 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2096.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 347.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04034582133 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340057636888 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236311239193 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146974063401 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100864553314 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63700886321 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561959654179 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.2456914404 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5238095238 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0199175319 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8095238095 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5238095238 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 40.1549334431 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.57608695652 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290214584188 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0769677573836 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0523653664616 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460935450061 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134967952103 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100191106679 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550018532108 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.318131820569 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0579168358358 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20617979469 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426213859738 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.