Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are many ways to relax and reduce stress for people. Some relax the best when they are alone while others prefer spending time with others. In my opinion, the best way to relax and reduce stress is to share time with others such as my close friends. There are two reasons to support my idea, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First, when alone, I sometimes think negatively that causes even more stress. A lot of times when we want to relax, it is because we are stressed or concerned. If we spend time with others, such as family or friends, we can have fun time together and do not need to think negatively. For instance, when I was frustrated with my exam results, my friends asked me to hang out. While spending time with her, I had a great time instead of thinking about my grade as I had been in the morning when I was alone at my room. I profoundly believe that having close friends together lets us reduce stress.
Second, together, with friends or family, we can solve the fundamental problems that causes the stress. Our friends may give us a great advice while talking with them. Concerns can sometimes be solved very simply when you have other perspectives. Talking to others and receiving advices may solve the fundamental problems we have. For example, when my sister was stressed by her miscommunication with her professor, I suggested her a very simple answer, to talk to the professor in person at school, and she realized how she was thinking too much. Without others' helps, very simple problem may seem to be extremely challenging. Spending time with others can reduce stress from the fundamental point.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great advice'.
Suggestion: great advice
...ses the stress. Our friends may give us a great advice while talking with them. Concerns can s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68275862069 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51493517408 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2844395524 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8823529412 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251026436356 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940531265636 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073086388431 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201653471915 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100234471299 0.0645574589148 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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