Without a shadow of a doubt, in the given hectic life, devoting a considerable amount of time to relax plays a pivotal role in an individual's both mental and physical calmness. An unanswered question in this area is whether people should spend these periods by themselves. Despite all the arguments asserting that spending time alone is sometimes required for individuals in order to make up their minds, I believe otherwise, maintaining that having companies can more effectively alleviate obstacles and stress. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
The first reason worth mentioning is that friends have the ability to analyze where the stress origin from and how to solve it. To illustrate more, we do have different friends of different backgrounds, and the ways they demonstrate things are quite different from us. When we are confused by a complicated problem, by sharing our confusion and stress with friends, more often than not, they can exert positive influence by examining the issue from other dimensions and provide distinct suggestions for us. According to their sincere advice, there must be one that is suitable for us to relax and reduce stress.
Another significant reason I suggest staying with friends is that taking part in many social activities with friends is an essential way to relax. There are numerous ways for us to choose to have fun with friends when we are upset or under stress. Taking my personal experience as a compelling example, when I was in my senior year, I was undergoing a tough time facing the difficulties of getting a higher TOEFL grade and applying a graduate school. The heavy stress ruined my mind and made me cannot concentrate on studying. Seeing my situation getting worse and worse, my friends invited me to join them in playing basketball every night, and they continuously gave the ball to me to help me build confidence again. Surrounded by the laugh and care from my friends, I have filled up with energy again.
A voice arises that spending time alone is also an effective way to truly relax and reduce stress. Admittedly, self-thinking can help people better recognize themselves and lift their spirit into a higher magnitude, nevertheless, this method is not suitable for everyone. If a depressed man insists on staying alone, negative thoughts will fill his mind and preclude being relaxed and thus seeds the plant of stress, and he will gradually suspect himself, which can form a vicious cycle to constantly destroy his mental health. In the contrast, staying with friends can effectively avoid this problem for not only they can provide care but also find psychological help immediately when the situation gets worse.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned above, I totally disagree with the opinion that the best way to truly relax or reduce stress is to spend time alone. While there are one hundred Hamlets in one hundred people's eyes, I strongly believe my opponents will yield after being shown to my article.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2555.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03944773176 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72536582107 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554240631164 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7134992344 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.35 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247659494297 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823650323746 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109390507339 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144038452276 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511276411958 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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