Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays there are still some schools which can be attended only by female (or male) students. This is because of some conservative politics which existed in the past. While some people believe that students should attend schools which separate them by gender, others believe that boys and girls should go to the same school. In my opinion, students should attend mixed schools. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, attending mixed school makes male and female students interact one another. This is extremely important since I believe that if boys were in a school with only male people, they would not understand how to respect girls and they would eventually feel superior to the other gender. Besides, if places of instructions were not mixed, there would be no equality between sexes. For instance, some students may wrongly think: “Why girls are separated from boys at school? Are they inferior?”. Some institutions are just attended by female students since some people believe that girls have to be protected and they should not enter in contact with the other sex. I strongly disagree with that: girls and boys must attend the same school (or university). In this way, they can appreciate one another and become aware that there is no difference between sexes. We are all equal, thus we have to go to the same school.
Second, attending separate school, students become close-minded and mature. In fact, being mature means reaching a deep and wide knowledge about the world around you and be responsible for your own life. If you studied in an environment which selects only male or female students, you could not broaden your horizons and you could develop wrong and strange ideas about the other gender. For example, I have a very close friend from South Korea who studied in a female school. When I firstly met her, I recognized that she looked at me in a curious way: she thought I was flirting with her, while I was just trying to become her friend. After she recognized I was a nice person, she told me that in school she was thought that men have all sexual thought in their minds. She had wrong conceptions since her school was narrow and conservative.
All in all, this essay discussed why students have to attend mixed school. This is because boys and girls have to talk with one another and because they become more mature and open-minded.
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Suggestion:
...hey become more mature and open-minded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84578313253 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44226823223 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474698795181 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1137899645 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4347826087 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166422616082 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542217748372 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057625063883 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108870327534 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316839850388 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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