Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of technology, cars have been increasing and this phenomenon has made people reflect upon automobile’s impacts on modern life. While some people believe that cars have enhanced people’s lives, others believe that the automobile has been a detrimental invention for humankind. In my opinion, vehicles have both negative and positive influence on our life. In the following essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages that the automobile has brought.
On one hand, cars have lots of benefits on people’s lives. The automobile is considered fast, practical and comfortable: having a car makes people live better compared to the past. My grandmother’s childhood is a compelling example of this. The island where she lived with her family—Ischia, in the gulf of Naples—was isolated and there was only a big market where she could buy food. She used to ride a horse for 20 kilometers in order to reach that destination. She usually says that if she had owned a car, it would have taken only 15 minutes, while riding a horse it took almost half a day: thus, the invention of the automobile has improved our living conditions.
On the other hand, cars have been polluting our planet. In fact, the automobile requires gas in order to work and fuel is obtained through the extraction and refinement of petroleum. These processes are extremely harmful for the environment, since it can cause climate change and the death of many animals. Besides, petroleum has also negative impact on human beings, since air pollution can cause lung cancer and other diseases. In the last years, cars have been multiplying and their exhaust have been increasing smog: this substance is full of toxic particulates. In many cities, people have to wear air masks in order to prevent serious illness. Thus, the automobile has been spoiling air and contaminating the environment.
All in all, this essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of cars. The automobile has made our lives better, but it has also caused serious environmental issues. In my opinion, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, since the negative consequences can be diminished by effective regulations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25423728814 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08801383145 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.624460129 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170039470621 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553744334212 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405781228077 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110731201786 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437769298906 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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