While majority of people claim that coed school are more beneficial for students and single-sex schools are type of discrimination, there are still some people who are more inclined to the fact that single-sex school are more effective. This cause a lot of people to have debates, and not all the people come to the right conclusion. From my perspective, mixed schools are more decent rather than single-sex school for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in my following essay.
First of all, we have to consider future of students, which are going to be enrolled in society which is constituted by both genders. Thus, students who didn't communicate with opposite gender in their school time will have serious problems such as conveying their opinions, having discussion and so on. For instance, you have been graduated from single-sex school and you are attending in a job interview and interviewer is opposite gender. She or he ask some question about yourself, but you are not willing to answer because you got nervous and you can not express your opinions or even reply to him or her. Consequently, you are probably going to lose your opportunity which may be your first and last one. By the same token, if you encounter opposite gender repetitiously your propensity to search for job is going to decline gradually over time , which will engender tremendous failure.
Secondly, I would like to accentuate that usually ideas, behavior of opposite genders differ, which may lead to debates or discussion of opinions that are quite effective for getting or having right knowledge. Likewise, you will have no hardships while you are attending in interviews or in job conferences which are very crucial for you to succeed in your carrier.
Thirdly, and may be the most fundamental point of advantages of mixed school, is impact on the behavior of opposite genders on each other. According to prices facts that I got from surveys, especially boys have tendency of behaving correctly while getting involved in places that consists of both genders. For example, boys are swearing or joking with each other when they are alone, but if they deem that there are also girls in that environment , they cease to use inappropriate actions. Besides, if you attended in single-sex school and got accustomed to bad manners there is high probability of you getting fired of job due to some actions that are irrelevant for opposite gender.
In conclusion, I would like to underline a point here that while giving decisions about our future that are significant for us ,we have to calculate every possibility in order to not face obstacles or to deal with hardships in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96213808463 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7225347773 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510022271715 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4318485232 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122405689919 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462343884036 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447710298514 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066974144739 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431839938582 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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