Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For a business to be successful, man must spend a lot of money on advertising.
Each company decides the various strategy to success for a business. While some companies consume bountiful money on advertisement, some companies focus on other ways to spend their money. It is so controvertible for them to select a specific method for accomplishment. In my view, they should spend plenty of money on advertising. They can acquire alternative consumers, boost the chance where people know about the company, and change bias obtained by people about the company.
To begin with, spending money on advertisements causes the company to gain different costumers. Generally speaking, each company already holds a regular amount of people who want to buy a product from the company. However, it is so confined for a company to gain particular consumers. Moreover, they do not provide ample advantage to earn enough supply. Therefore, companies put on their effort in an advertisement, so they are capable of grasp different categories of people such as nationals, genders, and ages, and so on.
Secondly, company polishes the situation where people notice the company to waste money on advertising. Once companies devote their money on advertisement, they have to choose the space to promote themselves. For instance, there is a commercial on television programs. In this way, people often see a television under many situations such as dinner time, conversations with friends, and after coming back home from work, and so on. As a result, it is so significant chance to recognize each company from television without searches. Consequently, people gradually interpret details about companies, so they accomplish in the harsh society of companies.
Finally, consumers obtaining the bias about a particular company alter their idea from an advertisement for the company. Some people hold serious prejudice against many companies because they simply do not interest in the company, read an article from the internet about bad comments toward the company, and listen to other biases from friends.
To sum up, company should determine to consume plenty of money on advertising. I surely believe that the company fascinates alternative people, improves the situation where people notice the company, and modifies the bias from people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in particular, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42165242165 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95857389144 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532763532764 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9677256949 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.15 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106583389512 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461969716737 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456785083073 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068567588225 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038803414782 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.