learning a new language is very useful for people especially learning an international language. Parents help their children to learn a new language by installing some applications for their children or by getting a tutor. While most people think that children should not learn a foreign language as soon as they start school, I believe they should learn it sooner because they will learn it faster and easier and i will analyze areas in my essay.
If children start learning a foreign language sooner at school, they will learn the language faster. They can start with the alphabets and numbers then gradually they will understand more things. For example, my sister registers her daughter to an English school, however our native language is not English. Her daughter start learning English language at a very small old. she does it very well even sometimes I could not speak well with her. This is therefore one of the reason i prefer that children should learn a new language as soon as at school.
Children can learn a new language easier if they start it as soon as possible at school. They will have much more time to study a foreign language if they start it sooner, in addition they can learn it gradually without any pressure. They will have much time to practice it with each other, in the result they can learn a foreign language like their native language, and they will have the ability to speak like a native speaker. This is another reason why i prefer start learning a new language sooner.
To sum up, they will learn a foreign language faster and more convenient if they begin learning as soon as possible they start school. I believe children should learn a foreign language as soon as they start school.
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... language as soon as they start school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, even so, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73754152824 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40085579824 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388704318937 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9582630331 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455595552769 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224457576026 0.076458572812 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139568508658 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372981959252 0.150856017488 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081675471031 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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