internet influence on people's life
Internet has provided a lot of facility to people’s life. Internet has a very good influence on people’s information and knowledge. People all around the world use internet in different ways. They use internet in study, business, to gain information, for health and so on.
People use internet in study. They study their universities online with less money and a lot of facility through internet. They get some language courses with the expert teachers. For example, when I was studying TOEFL, I had problem in speaking section, but when I searched for courses in internet I found a great teacher, and I have learned a lot of things from him. People can find a lot of study materials and books through internet. They use internet to aware from new discoveries in science, astronomy, zoology, earth and so on. I myself use google in my free time to inform about new discoveries.
People use internet in business. They use from internet to sell and buy goods. they use from internet to sell their goods online with a lot of good websites and companies like: amazon, eBay, Alibaba and so on, also we can buy things through these companies. Businessmen use internet to buy goods and transport it from one country to another country just by using internet, and staying at home.
People use internet in health. they can find a lot of medical information through internet. they can use internet to know about drugs, how to use them, in addition to know about side effect of that drug. People use internet to chat with their doctors to ask for advice from everywhere. Today we have some online doctors which consult with patients.
In conclusion, internet has a great influence on people’s information. Internet has solved a lot of people’s problems nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76320265071 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0205552182 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2272727273 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387363500896 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17684535618 0.076458572812 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163756326814 0.0737576698707 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315618900681 0.150856017488 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192170033157 0.0645574589148 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.