Parents play a great role on children. Every parents should spend more time with their children, It will be good for both of them the parents and children, but in this complex world everyone is busy with their work. They do not have much time to spend with the children. I believe that parents should tell their children to do both of them, having fun and spending time with schoolwork because of some reasons which i will explore in the following essays.
Parents must manage their children time. They should make a schedule for their fun time, study time, and sport. Children need all of them, they should spend time with schoolwork to have a great score on it in order to pass the class. Sport is also important for them to be health and fit. We cannot study well if we are not healthy, so sport has an important part in our life. We should give our time for sport. Nowadays doctors recommend sport for more people especially students in order to study well. Parents usually go to work until the night, and the children are alone at home for some hours, and this loneliness may depress them, so the best way to diminish the depression is to have fun with the friends and to exercise.
Previous to my points, parents should always call their children during the break. They should know the state of their children. Moreover, the parents should spend most of their time with the children in holidays. They should fulfill the need of their children. I think children need is their parent, so they should spend more time and play with them.
To sum up, parents have to get the greatest plan for their children, and make a good schedule for them.
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...n order to pass the class. Sport is also important for them to be health and fit....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54882154882 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14146708106 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0018925821 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0555555556 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490918523909 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216041482566 0.076458572812 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134773829686 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335947223497 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146761091954 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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