Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should spend most of their time on studying and playing, they shouldn’t be required to help family with household chores, such as cleaning and cooking.
I believe the children will grow up some day, so they have better to help the famliy with the housework when they are young. Studying and playing are important to them, but this importance is not controversial with the housework. I will address my view as follows.
To begin with, doing housework would benefit the children for many cases. Among these advantages, the recoginization of the host of the family is essential for the children. As they would be aware that they are resposible of the family they live in. Everything in the house should be protected well not only by their parents but also by them. As I was at the age of 8, my mother told me that I should clean my bedroom by myself. At first I found it was a hard work for me as there was no bedroom for me at all because I was living in the living room, with a flexible sofa which could be changed to a little bed. Thus part of the housework was on my shoulders. From TV to the table, I wiped everywhere and cleaned the floor for times. Later, I accumulated the experince of cleaning the house. When I was at school, we were told to clean the classroom, I found everything in cleaning seemed so easy to me. I cleaned the floor and wall quickly and got praised by my teacher.
In addtion, I got money from cleaning the house. As a kind of praise, my mother rewarded me that every time I do the housework like cleaning, I would get ten yuan. It was a big encouragement for a kid of eight in China. While unfortuantely I regeretted that I didn’t learn how to cook. Maybe I would got rewards and make delcious food for my family at the same time.
Finally, as the nature of children, playing is equally siganificant for them. While that it not to say that children would be deprived the time of playing. In my opinion, there must be a perfect balance of playing and doing housework for every child.Also, as the duty of children, education should be put at the first place. While it is not an excuse that they shouldn't help their parents with the housework. As a member of a family, everyone except the baby should take the resposiblity of doing housework, that would form the proper living attitude of the youth, or in other words, no pains, no gains.
In all, playing and learning are important for children, while there must be a pefect balance among the housework and them. In that doing housework would cultivate the children in daily life which they could not learn from books and games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45033112583 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54928372615 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459161147903 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4909359685 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5384615385 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22220507476 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670910863689 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048312543614 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131811113525 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438114569328 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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