Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children should only study or play and don t have to do household chores | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only study or play and don’t have to do household chores.

Learning many aspects of real-life is one of the most important elements during the childhood period. Some people might say that their children should just study hard, while others may think that their kids should contribute to do some household tasks. I agree with the latter of view. My reasons are substantiated in subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that doing household chores by kids can be a good practice to face real-life. To clarify, parents can educate their offspring on how to contribute to teamwork tasks before entering real life. For instance, my parents taught me how to wash dishes and make my bed with their help when I was nine years old. Over time, I felt a sense of being a member of the group, so during my school, I became a good basketball player because I had learned the concept of having the spirit of teamwork earlier. Additionally, even if parents do not contribute to tasks given to children to do, children will learn how to shoulder responsibility. In this vein, parents prepare children to accept their duties and make decisions. This experience improves the children’s thinking; thus, they would think about the consequence of their works. As a result, they would climb the ladder of success gradually.
Another point that makes me hold this view is that children experience a sense of being independent by accomplishing home tasks. To elucidate. In hustle and bustle of life, many parents have to work from dawn to dusk due to financial problems, so parents may not able to take care of their children round-the-clock. children might offer their helping hand to their mother and father after they learn how to perform something, such as cleaning the room, cooking some eatable foods, and to name but a few. Therefore, children can feel that not only do they feel autonomy but also they are mature enough to execute tasks perfectly. During childhood time, these trivial tasks aforementioned give children a sense of achievement. Consequently, children will be delighted and their self-esteem would increase due to carrying out simple tasks successfully.
To sum up, I believe that parents should ask their kids to do some household chores in addition to their studies. This is because they can be prepared for real-life sooner, and they can learn how to be self-government.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00256410256 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81063655486 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1101486669 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.55 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187556179995 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584592652529 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650860379192 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132294365608 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322612807091 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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