Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Company should not allow their employees to using email during weekend.
When it comes to sending email or messages, whether is it suitable to allow workers to talk about work through it. Although some believe company should allow that, it is prohibiting worker to discuss work during weekend will contribute more benefits to the company.
It is so argued that employees can use their resting time to complete the work they have not done through email, because it can enhance the efficiency of the company. Supporters of this argument must be reminded that, in practicality, this policy will let the company much less efficient. Workers will not be happy to be disrupted by working when they are watching movies or going hiking. Thus, they may not be able to complete the task with their full capability, and they might just reply email abruptly. As the result, the quality or efficiency of the work may decline. By contrast, if employees do their work in the normal schedule, they will not be disturbed by other activity. They can focus on the work and done it much better.
Supporters of talking about work by sending messages may still argue that sometimes workers cannot finish their work, they must bring it back to complete it. The real picture of this argument, however, is that the actual reason why the workers cannot end their tasks within normal schedule is either because the work load is too big or the workers lack of capability to done it in time. None of these problems can be solved just by letting workers do it on weekend. Besides, this policy will let the workers lazy during work, since they know even if they cannot finish it, they still have time in weekend. By comparison, when working at weekend is inhibited, workers can cultivate good habits to complete their work on time and enhance their capability. And that is the reason why the best company in the world do not let their employees work overtime.
Talking about work by sending email on Saturdays and Sundays is not necessary a cog to make the machine of the company run. It is prohibiting this policy can increase efficiency and can let workers cultivate good habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77348066298 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39674596002 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450276243094 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9367813733 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166779713276 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670229669848 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565600156755 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113692162239 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419372187271 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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