Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually has negative impacts on friendship.
What is supposed to be the essential factor that affects the lasting of a friendship? A general controversy arises when people are discussing competitions between friends. Some people reckon that the competitions between friends are detrimental to this relationship, and even bring it to an end. However, as far as I am concerned, I hardly concur with this opinion, and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
Admittedly, fierce competition between friends can make friendships severed. A large number of people attach great importance to companions from their friends. They can vent their emotions in front of their close friends without considering these behaviors may undermine their personal interests. Besides, competition can easily incur some pressure between friends, and under the circumstance of fast-paced life, people cherish the relaxation that friends bring to them and attempt to keep the peace ever-lasting. Competitions can readily cause a break between different people when they need to meet their own needs, and nobody wants to compromise. The sense of cooperation can be crippled, and people may become aloof to their friends.
However, it is too rash to label all competition between friends as negative ones, and competition may generate more marvelous opportunities from which friends can mutually benefit. Moderate competitions between friends can provide blessed chances to learn from each other. When you and your friends are in the same competition, your goals are similar and there must be some skills and experience to share with each other. Although one may not be the superior winner ultimately, he or she can still learn a lot with the assistance of friends and witness the unprecedented growth of each other. My experience is a terrific example of this point. In my sophomore, one of my friends and I studied assiduously for an exam, and we all needed a better grade for the application for the master’s programs. Despite the competition, the memories of helping each other grapple with the problems linger. Although my friend became the best student at that time, I still appreciate her assistance. True friendships never fade because of competition.
In addition, it is undeniable that your friends are not the only rivals in the competition at most times. There are always other competitors you and your friends need to confront. So, it is more advisable for you and your friends to assist each other under this circumstance, although you are still “enemies” to some extent. To illustrate, before the exams, studying with your friends can do you a favor to utilize your wits to assimilate the knowledge as much as possible, and get more advantages than other students. In a company, just because you and your friends struggle for the same bonus does not mean your untiring work will not increase the marketing share of the whole company, leading to an increased salary in the future.
In a nutshell, with the reference to the arguments above, not all competitions between friends will definitely lead to an awful consequence. Provided that we treat the competition with ease, we can still possess a long-lasting friendship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2673.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93778933697 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495126705653 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0843065871 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.807692308 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7307692308 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88461538462 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260919125027 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814883009479 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556510600707 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159446656776 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301401715305 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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