Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually has negative impacts on friendship.
Friends provide companionship and comfort when needed. A long lasting friendship gives us joy and happiness, making our lives more fulfilling. However, competition between friends’ have negative impacts on friendship. The reasons are as following.
To begin with, too much competition between friends may lead to friendship severed. As we all know, friends are supposed to provide companion when we are alone, to listen to our heart when we have something to share and to give us comfort when we have sad feelings. Friends’ role is to make us feel confident about ourselves. Whereas, too much competition makes us feel less confident about ourselves, because the achievement of a relatively more capable one’s in a certain area, such as a high standing in a particular subject they study, reminds another of his or her inadequacy in ability, which will certainly make the less capable one experience anxiety, sense of inferiority or even jealousy. Over time, the less capable one may want to distance him or herself from his or her friend. Once the deep bond between the two friends become weaker, the estrangement between them would probably bring to an end their precious friendship.
What’s more, competition between friends may lessen their sense of cooperation. It is commonly believed that friends need to support and motivate each other when there are difficulties. More importantly, when they want to achieve a shared goal, teamwork really matters. Only through the hardship they experienced and overcame together, can they gain a solid friendship which is so unbreakable that they will benefit from it for a lifelong time. However, if intense competition is exhibited between them in their daily lives, such as the competition in grades in school, personal income and social status, the awareness of cooperation may be crippled. They might be less willing to provide help to each other since one’s success means another’s failure. This is harmful not only to their friendship but also to their work efficiency since cooperation helps to save time and energy.
Admittedly, a moderate degree of competition between friends can serve a function of motivation for our lives. A capable and caring friend can be a perfect role model for us to make progress in what we do in order to keep up with him or her. Nevertheless, if one’s motivation has an origin in other people’s incentive, its effect couldn’t last as long. What’s more, a truly trustworthy and considerate friend would not put others under pressure with his or her superiority in some areas.
Overall, the negative impacts of competition between friends shouldn’t be overlooked respecting its threat to the close bond developed through friendship and the sense of cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34304932735 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02096826714 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535874439462 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.304194413 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.318181818 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223734017973 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833125092416 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927069595971 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163090073994 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542455380734 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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