Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Dissatisfaction leads to progress. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People in different societies are working hard for plenty of reasons. Development is something similar between every nation which they pay much more attention to it. Some people think that this can be achieved if a sense of dissatisfaction present among them. However, some others suggest that progress is a big matter and cannot be judged by only one parameter. I believe that dissatisfaction is the origin of every feeling in any community due to some reasons although few persons may question them anyway.
First, any group or society must come to the understanding about lack of something which makes them to demand it. When you feel you have not had a privilege or you were banned from achieving it, a sense of dissatisfaction exists inside yourself that push you toward getting that. For example, if you cannot play football at school because your school has not built a soccer ground and you watch other kids playing easily in their own school fields, it triggers an emotion in you which force you to do something about that. Surprisingly, these feelings would not go away until you possess whatever you are struggling about.
Secondly, dissatisfaction has the main role in most protests which are shaped in opposition of any governments. Generally, governments and state legislators listen to their people less than what it must be properly. So, no demand and revolution will occur if they silence any dissatisfaction generated in society.
Furthermore, scientifically humans’ brains are set in such a especial configuration that any deficiency and missing of something would trigger a person’s mind to do some action to compensate that void. So any other factors which élite folks debate about are naturally initiated by the dissatisfaction and altered to other more complex desires in a larger society. Therefore, we should know that when we react to an awful situation inevitably, it is our brain which is talking and we shall listen to it.
In summary, people like to gain a variety of goals during their life. However, sometimes they try harder to achieve them. Experts link that to our sense of dissatisfaction consequently. I think that this fact can be almost true since we do our best to have something when we lack it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04278074866 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95690979031 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582887700535 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.423455318 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2631578947 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123569502173 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341900482313 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362103281316 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611980361399 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401025453737 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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