Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.

Since the dawn of humanity, Human life had been dependent on the interaction between mankind and his environment. Nowadays by the surge of population and development of technology, effects of human activities on the environment have expanded such as decreased water quality, increased pollution, greenhouse gas emissions, and depletion of natural resources. Without the shadow of doubt this phenomenon requires urgent action. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is that “who is responsible for this problem?” some people may hold the view that governments should take care of this issue. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should individually handle this problem. I personally contend that because of complex nature of this issue people can’t handle it individually. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that according to statistics most of the environmental contamination is caused by the industries, not by households. Industrial pollutant represents the leading worldwide cause of pollution in general and probably the most toxic to nature. One of the most common is water pollution caused by the dumping of industrial waste into the waterways. Industries can also cause air and soil pollution. Coping with this worldwide problem requires intervention of governments and International environmental protection organizations. There should be a worldwide alliance to handle the issue and it is not up to the individuals.
Another reason which deserves some words here is the high expenses of applying practical solutions. In order to shed more light on the proposed concept, one person could not be affordable to spend a large amount of money for the purpose of decreasing the environmental problems. For instance, there are several lakes and seas around the world which have been polluted by humans or factories during last decades. Since clearing them from contamination needs technological instruments, it costs a lot. Therefore, government must allocate a specific budget for removing environmental issues which are promulgated in our society. By this budget people would hope for resolving these troubles.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Environmental problems are wide and distributed around the universe. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent social research show that more than 80 percent of citizens must contribute to manage or omit the environmental issues. This amount of participation requires a large and comprehensive planning. One of the government’s top concerns should be creating a new culture. For instance, they can hold some workshops at universities and schools to inform students and their families how associate to decline the natural pollutions. These programs not only make people more conscious about threatens of environmental contamination but also encourage them to have a role in performing decontamination actions.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to the fact that the environmental problems are too sophisticated to be omitted by an individual. Solving these widespread issues exclusively is expensive and demands a lot of time and energy. I firmly recommend committees, hand in hand with, governments take actions for eradicating the environmental troubles.

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Average: 3.7 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3044.0 1977.66487455 154% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58532110092 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26499518934 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557798165138 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 956.7 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1945055658 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16476330843 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416182992773 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466767678306 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959265640302 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415932187698 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 175.0 86.8835125448 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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