In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
Throughout history, especially in the current modern era that has affected human being lifestyle profoundly, people tend to give prominence to the issue of their mental and physical health. Doing exercises has always been one of the top considerations of modern people in order to overcome their daily stress that mostly stems from their hectic way of living and prevent physical health problems. A controversial question, which is often raised regarding this issue, is that, whether it is better to do exercises individually or attend group exercises. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that doing exercises alone will have a better impact on our health, while many others believe that exercises that are done in a group are more beneficial. I, despite the prevailing view, contend that doing exercise individually has more advantages. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first salient aspect to be introduced is that by doing exercises solely, one can adapt the intensity of it based on his or her physical threshold. It is beyond doubt that people bodies and their physical conditions differ with each other. In order to get the most advantage from exercising each person should adjust the severity of physical training with his or her body limits. This can be done only by means of individual exercises. When one is doing a group exercise such as team sports, It is axiomatic that in order for him to be an invaluable member of the team, he should have the same stamina as other team members. Take a personal experience as an example, when I was playing for my high school basketball team, one of my friends was prohibited by his doctor to join the team, for his heart disease.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that when people do individual exercises time is in their hands. This kind of exercises provides us with the opportunity to schedule our training based on our available times. Nowadays, due to the economic recession making money is amongst the top priorities of people, hence allocating a free time in their daily working schedule to do exercises is getting more difficult than before. In this regard finding an appropriate time for all members of a group has become somehow impossible. By doing individual exercises not only are people able to benefit from the privileges of doing exercises, but also they are free to manage their time concerning their own preferences. To illustrate this point, I want to mention the results of a recent study which was conducted in my country. This study pointed out that there is a significant difference between the times that working people usually allocate to doing exercises in a day.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons leads us to the fact that doing exercises alone has some more benefits than group exercising among which the ability to manage daily time and control the severity of exercise are the most prominent ones. In my opinion, the essence of being healthy is more important than achieving it through individual or group exercises. People should not postpone doing exercises because of their hesitant between choosing the way of doing it. As a matter of fact, some other reasons and examples can be invoked to support my perspective, but let's suffice to this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, while, in brief, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2772.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73114492628 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490054249548 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 888.3 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9449831126 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.52173913 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0434782609 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316098976666 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937342227713 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635662075229 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205334242512 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415619821997 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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