Public transportation system in every country shows the developement of that country. There are lots of debate about the priority of having better public transportation system or improving internet access. In my opinion, although both are very important for people the public transportation system needs more spending and has priority and my reasons go as follows.
First of all, people with every needs will benefit from improving public transportation system. For example, people can reach to their destination or work faster and their waste time would decrease. Increase in efficient time can bring more happiness and better life for people. Even ,people who use their own car benefit. They would stay less in trafic and save more time.
Also, better public transportation system helps having less traffic and therefore less polusion. Considering less volume of cars and vehicles produce less noise and burning fossil fuel and polution.
Moreovere, eventhough accessing to fast internet could be very helpful for people,increasing the population and its results on trafic , polusion and so forth are more essential. Spending money on transportation by government can improve the roads and accidents which every year cause lots of death. Nowadays, the accidents are the leading cause of death in undeveloped counry. Death due to accident has inversely corrolation with the developement of every country. Therefore for being a developed country government has to spend more on them.
In conclusion, however,internet acess is very important for every day life . People would benefit more from efficeint public transport even they do not use it.It lowers the trafic and polusion and accident ,thus ,benefit the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46992481203 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92715021793 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5038864289 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5882352941 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179133711462 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610312737565 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509088106878 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976390406822 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519156304556 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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