Do you agree or disagree with following statement the government should support scientist research even if there is no practical use.
Today there is no shortage of debate that the government should support all scientific research even if they are useless. A lot of people support this idea, because they are strongly convinced that those research will be beneficial in the future for the next generation. however, I totally disagree with this point of view, because there are a large number of another vital purposes to spend money.
First of all, the unemployment rate dramatically increases in last twenty years. It is common knowledge that the government should support their civil and provides them a better life. Unfortunately, according to the statistic, more than forty percent of people in the world lost their jobs. It is happening because the government started to fund scientific research. Moreover, prevalent part of those research is meaningless. From my point of view, those discoveries probably will have an affect on future life, but the government should live in the present.
Secondly, there is a small number of free programs for people. It is goes without say that nowadays not all people can afford joining in some clubs, because they are usually extremely costly. For example, I am a professional tennis player and my parents spend more than half of their wages on my hobby. Furthermore, due to this fact my family can not afford a lot of other pleasures, such as, holidays in the foreign country. For this reason, I suppose that the governments has to spend budget on development free clubs for civil, because it will help people to live full and interesting life.
Finally, education today is extremely costly. It is definitely true that education in the twenty century allows for everyone, but not all people can afford it. according to my friend`s experience, he has four siblings, so his parents spend all their money on their children needs. However, my friend does not have enough money to entire university, so he will have to work after graduating from school. In addition, I suggest that the government must help this sort of people as my friend and makes education affordable or even free.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I am strongly convinced that spending budget on science has a lot of perspectives, but more vital to spend this money on civils needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i suppose, in addition, sort of, such as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00260416667 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015920048 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513020833333 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5844066973 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.05 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118942218018 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426033221729 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648242720809 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753130779028 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808868774246 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.