The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today`s world?
Today there is no shortage of debate that the Internet has a great influence on people`s live. And some people are strongly convinced that this accessable flow of Information has a lot of disadvantages and negative affects of people. But from my point of view, this ability to have a big quantity of information from the Internet has a countless benefits, and I feel this way for some reasons.
Firstly, it was an extremely difficult to get some vital information in past. It is common knowledge that before the Internet, people were forced to find information from a large number of sources, which was inconvinience for them. Moreover, some information was concealed or banned, because of a lot of politics conflicts. According to my mother experience, she was involved in some political and law researches. In addition, she wanted to get some information on topic, which was interesting for her. But unfortunately, she did not find anything, because of political situation in your country, and finally she was an extremely upset and regreted about it, so she decided to leave her interests. So, that is how the Internet is able to help people continue their hobbies.
Secondly, unless appearing the Internet, students around the world will suffer from lack of information. It is definitely true that university and school programs nowadays are more sofisticated and intricate than it used to be. So, it will be an unbearable task for students to perform their assignments without the Internet access. According to my father experience, when he was at university, he was have to make a lot of paper works. And once, his professor gave him an extremely difficult task, so he was not able to find any information according to this theme. Furthermore, he failed this task , but if he had an available Internet access, he would be able to avoid it.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, it goes without say that the appearence of the Internet has a lot of merits, because it gives us an opportunity to choose hobbies, which we are really keen on, and also, facilitates our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le were forced to find information from a large number of sources, which was inconvinience for th...
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...eover, some information was concealed or banned, because of a lot of politics con...
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...get some information on topic, which was interesting for her. But unfortunately, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91036414566 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94352579768 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0952855084 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212035095459 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753039353571 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542020735297 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129244622956 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796120950986 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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