Nowadays, merely all the people play sports when they are free or they are just engage in sports. So there is an assertion that playing sports can teach people lessons about life. Considering my experience, playing basketball, I totally agree with this assertion. From sports, I learn a lot, and more accurately, some of them are life-long lessons.
Firstly, the initial lesson I learn from sports is that even if you strive for one thing so hard, you might still be unable to succeed. Why? This is because something called unchangeable factors, for instance talents, opportunities. Take my experience as an case in point. Before I engaged in basketball, I once played table tennis in my school team. I learnt this sport when I was only 6 years old. Thus, on account of my early exercise on table tennis, so I could play this sport slightly better than peers. But when I entered into my school team, facing with so many talented athletes, though I dedicated myself into table tennis' practice every day, I were the last one all the time when competing with teammates. At that time, I knew that endeavor cannot be the only factor to people success, many other factors are altogether determine whether people can succeed or not,
Secondly, another lesson learned from sports is that you are ought to never give up until the last minute. It means that, do not lose hope before the final result come out. In contrast, we are unable to be satisfied too early till to the last moment. Once, I participated in a basketball competition and competed with an extreme strong team, the one who had won the last competition the time before that year. No one believed that our team can win the competition in the end. However, during the games, our team members never gave up. Although they were so strong that we were exhausted at the first half, we still made great effort to defend them and found opportunities to get points. At the last minute, my teammate, Emily, threw a 3-point ball into basket and reversed the failure of our team. Finally, we won and we learnt that never give up until the last moment.
Also, resilience is the third lesson I get from sports. When we play sports, especially competing activities, we will always win and lose in competition. So how to be motivated when we fail and do not be proud when we win the games is essential for every person.
All in all, the lessons about success, persistence, resilience are the three important lessons I learned from sports. It is undeniable that these lessons are advantageous for us in our whole life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s, opportunities. Take my experience as an case in point. Before I engaged in bask...
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Line 3, column 832, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...cess, many other factors are altogether determine whether people can succeed or not, S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thus, for instance, in contrast, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71777777778 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52554846751 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2810660189 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.92 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724799250909 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212205321706 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231756505937 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358702817978 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243127366397 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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