Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Arts and athletic activities are dispensable elements of evolved societies. Although none of them are of the primary needs of people, for numerous reasons they both play a crucial rule in the world. Actually, they give hue and add diversity to the mundane lives of the working class. Governments spend a huge sum in support of arts and athletics annually. However, many believe that governments should spend more money in support of arts rather than spending in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. It has long been a controversial issue which is not easy to reach consensus about. I disagree with the notion because of considerable reasons, some of which I am going to elaborate.

To begin with, with the advent of potent media technologies, athletic achievements can bring about glory to a country. The majority of people of different social strata cherish sports because in times of hardship it helps them relieve stresses. When a country's Olympic team conquer an opponent, the people of the country who are watching the game feel great excitement and satisfaction. In addition, when an Olympic team's endeavors pay off and they win a medal, the pertinent country's flag is raised in the stadium. The consequence is that the whole world would respect the country. It can attest to the nation's superiority and heighten its power and prestige among the other nations. On the contrary, although great works of art can also make fame for the countries, such works are a little scarce, mostly produced by self-trained ingenious artists, not the supported ones. They do not appeal to many people either. Hence, if countries crave making a name for themselves and satisfy their under-rule people, it is preferable that they support athletics.

Alongside what we discussed above; supporting athletic activities can enhance the health of society in multiple facets. First, athletic activities include a lot of participants who would be benefited from physical activity. Second, it is well documented that people tend to idolize athletic champions, and this can motivate them to imitate their lifestyle. It can induce them to do more exercise, eat healthier food and refrain from unhealthy behaviors such as smoking. exercise to a larger extent in an attempt to change into stronger, healthier individuals such as their mentors. For instance, my brother is extremely into soccer and somehow worships his favorite soccer player. Consequently, he always follows that person's pieces of advice about the outstanding effects of a healthy lifestyle entailing regular exercise and a healthy diet. Therefore, my brother goes to the gym every day to build a body suitable for becoming a successful soccer player. This new attitude helped him in contrasting aspects of his life from his physical health to mental and even intellectual development.

The last, but not the least; supporting athletic activities costs much more. There are many prerequisites that should be provided for such activities. First of all, athletics need an appropriate field to practice in and high-quality clothing and tools. Second, as they have to dedicate all of their time practicing for the competitions, they have to be well-paid so that they do not need to work on a secondary occupation. In addition, athletic activities are fraught with severe injuries, and the payments have to compensate for them too. Finally, athletics have to travel frequently in order to compete with others, and the plane tickets and hotel reservation costs are inevitable. It can be readily inferred that athletic activities need more funds than arts.

According to the aforementioned reasons; although many people may believe the other way, it seems that governments should spend more money in support of athletics. Despite the athletic activities being more costly, governments would gain glory and prestige in the world supporting them, and the health conditions in the society would improve too. Considering the status quo, it is recommended that governments do not take the advantages of athletic teams for granted. It's incumbent on them to support them financially by all means.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...spect the country. It can attest to the nations superiority and heighten its power and ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Exercise
...om unhealthy behaviors such as smoking. exercise to a larger extent in an attempt to cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 52.1666666667 173% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3494.0 1977.66487455 177% => OK
No of words: 666.0 407.700716846 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24624624625 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08005667302 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86683038637 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 348.0 212.727598566 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1080.0 618.680645161 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2232189659 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294116537519 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700820441907 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101426483709 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184121384884 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107850335382 0.0645574589148 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 86.8835125448 207% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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