Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Job is one of the most important part of every individual's live. Every one dedicate more than 40% of his/her live doing job. Furthermore, our job has a significant effect on our family life. Most of the time we manage our live in order to not interfere our carrier. I believe that people should wait until they find a job that would be more satisfying for two reasons.
Firstly, if a person chooses a job and it is not satisfying, he would not enjoy. We select a job not only to support us financial, but in order to enjoy and find meaning in our live. A satisfying job give self-confidence and reach us mentally to prosperity. As an example I have a friend he is a blue collar worker and enjoy from every single moment of his live because he is satisfy with his job.
Secondly, he will promote in his job if he chooses it by his own desire. Because he enjoys he always search for new things. All the time he thinks in order to improve his carrier, he do risk, try new things and read book about his/her field of working and finally he will improve.
For instance, My friend Ahmad is a school teacher. He has a deep love with his job. Every time he speaks how he enjoy from teaching. Now he invented new teaching strategies. And he will teach them for all teachers across my country, so creativity is happening when a person does most satisfying job.
In conclusion, I believe that If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should not take it right away and wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Because it is enjoyable and lead to creativity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rstly, if a person chooses a job and it is not satisfying, he would not enjoy. We select a job no...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...single moment of his live because he is satisfy with his job. Secondly, he will promot...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'searches'.
Suggestion: searches
...own desire. Because he enjoys he always search for new things. All the time he thinks ...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...nks in order to improve his carrier, he do risk, try new things and read book abou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38225255973 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5406066319 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6942700848 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5789473684 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4210526316 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256339593454 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956136747019 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12496793881 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191274853863 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147232502339 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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