Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the progressive and sophisticated world, educational matters play a significant role in the lives of human beings since they determine the level of the success and progress in every society. In this matter, teachers role in the universities are very critical. While many people hold the opinion that by increasing the salaries of professors the quality of education will improve, others believe that there are different factors for accomplish this aim. I agree with the first perspective. The reasons to support my viewpoint is elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, high salaries for teachers would enhance their concentration and energy that they allocate for their teaching. To be more specific, nowadays, people have been engaged to prepare a comfortable environment for their family. Regarding the importance of money in individuals' life, ones strive to earn a reasonable amount of money. Furthermore, if people could not earn sufficient money from their first job, they eager to find a second job along with first one. Therefore, it is evident that they need to spend some parts of their energy and concentration for their second occupation. As a result, If universities spend more money for their employees, especially professors, teachers might spend all of their efforts and time for improve their experiences in their field and convey them to the students.
Moreover, more knowledgeable people are attracted to be a university professor. To put in the other word, competition among people, who are seeking for find a decent job, will increase if universities provide more benefits, such as paying them high salary for their teachers. Nowadays, young people who have graduated from universities and they have a good background they do not any motivation to be a professors. The more salary universities pay to professors, the more people encourage being a professor. Therefore, numerous students will participate in universities job opening and universities could absorb more talented and ingenious students. Consequently, the level of education will increase.
In conclusion, having all the aforementioned reasons into account, I think high salary for professors will improve the quality of education in universities. This is because not only can professors use all of their energy but also high salary can enhance competition among many student to be university professors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42021276596 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06112746518 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2334715309 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.263157895 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206466748424 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073360503555 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439182425049 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133497639472 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018669342206 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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