Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The teacher is a fundamental aspect in education process hence it cannot be supplanted with other things such as internet or textbooks. Moreover, the expertise that professor bring to the classroom is the soul of university education. His or her experience and skill needs to be acknowledged, one of the ways to appreciate it is with increasing their salary. Personally, I agree with the statement because several reasons I would like to elaborate in the next paragraph.
First, the substantial income will hinder the professor to work at many universities. Therefore, he or she will spend more time to assist the student in the campus. They will be able to help the tutor process or even give additional class if needed. Additionally, the less fatigue professor give more energetic teaching ambiance thus the student will more excited to attend the class.
Secondly, the higher salary also encourages the professor to provide better service to the student. They will more likely to teach wholeheartedly and more tentative. For example, a professor who gets lower income probably does not want to exonerate the material to an apathetic student since they believe it is not worth the effort. In the other end, with a higher wage, the professor will feel responsible to provide more service to the student hence he or she will try to gain the attention the apathy student.
Lastly, the professor becomes more prolific in research because of the higher salary. It is a fact that the more high-quality scientific journals boost a prestige of the university. Especially, the research leads to the invention of avant-garde material or theory. The accolades that the professor gains also make the university name more famous. For example, an international student will choose a university with numerous Nobel laureates and well-known professor than the one with least famous names. The more students, more money the university gain hence the investment to the professor salary is substantially advantageous.
Ultimately, the increment in salary for a professor will benefit the student, the university, and the scientific world. All the things considered, I believe it is necessary to increase the professor salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26197183099 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95561291257 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0272058039 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102295729607 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367330427127 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434861975497 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616344736773 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539200550294 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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