Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The increase in automation will lead to people losing their jobs.
There has been a tremendous increase in automation during recent times and this has helped the humans a lot in various ways. I disagree with the statement that increase in automation would lead to people lose their jobs because of the below reasons.
Automation has boosted all the industries. Due to automation instead of people losing their jobs, there has been an increase in the job opportunity. As experienced people are required to automate and service or take care of the products. I would like to state an example of Mahindra and Mahindra company. When they decided to automate their car manufacturing unit, they required machines, servers as well as people to take of these products. Due to this there were new job openings in the market which led to job opportunity.
Secondly, automation is useful because machines can work day and night without any rest. Due to this companies started working 24 hours which required them to hire more and more employees. Earlier there would only be a single shift of 8 hours but now due to automation as the companies started working 24 hours, in shifts of 8 hours each there is man power required which has created an opportunity for jobs. One of uncle used to work in a biscuit company and somedays he had to extend his work due to heavy orders. But due to automation he's able to complete his work earlier and also in time. If due to any reasons he's not able to complete the task then he can log off for the day as there would be another person resuming the work once he log offs.
So, in short automation has helped people in different ways and it has created more job opportunities instead of people losing their jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64983164983 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53374106414 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498316498316 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1152310248 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254753395261 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105769494933 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139553903171 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219852345838 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131610351985 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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