Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
The increasing in automation will lead to people losing their jobs.
Some people argue that the increasing in automation in the working field will lead many people losing their jobs. I completely agree with this statement of increasing in number of automatic equipment’s in the field of production and manufacturing will make more people to lose their jobs. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, the automatic equipment’s are error free and produces manufacturing goods with precise accuracy. In today’s world, people demand the products with high standard quality with the best performance. Consequently, automatic equipment’s are calibrated with the values to manufacture the goods with high accuracy leading minimum errors. For instance, generally people ask for the products with better efficiency with minimum maintenance. Thus, goods manufacture with the help of machine are higher in quality, however people generally have tolerance while measuring and manufacturing goods that leads to errors. It is important that due to higher accuracy, people generally demand products manufacture by the machines rather than human beings which leads to people lose their jobs.
Secondly, the automatic equipment’s are designed to work in harsh climatic conditions and are able to work for long durable period of time without maintenance. However, human beings are emotional, do eat regularly to withstand long working period and take rest in between the working period in order to get rid of fatigue. This is best exemplified by my personal experience. Generally, in forging process, human body has to resist high environmental temperature of furnace of 1000 degree Celsius and sometimes feel sick during work whereas machine can easily overcome that temperature and can withstand longer period of time without repair. As a result, automatic machines are preferring in comparison to human beings leading to massive job loss.
Finally, the automatic machines are risk free and are very effective. Evidently, the automatic machinery tools are designed with precise accuracy and all the errors are taken into account in order to make equipment’s risk free with more effectiveness. For instance, each year millions of dollars are spending on research and development in order to make machinery tools risk free with most effective. This leads to utilization of machines at each field from manufacturing to agriculture sector leading to massive job loss for human.
In conclusion, to my mind, the rise in automation will leads more job loss in the near future. This is because automatic machines are accurate in production and produces products without errors and because they are able to withstand harsh climatic conditions where people are unable to overcome.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89427629664 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451990632319 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6802476316 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272424652537 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921906340218 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096635777474 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15940357001 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115116910376 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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