We live in the world that there is a specific branches for every subject for whom they like to pursue. This specific matters are so extensive that have a person who do not choose one specific will be confused and unsuccessful in life. A plethora of people might inclined toward the notion that it is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects, however, I personally rely on the idea that it is better to specialize in one specific subject. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my stand point is, this world needs specialists. As I mentioned before, every tiniest subject has specific field. For instance, consider a human body as an example. In the past centuries doctors had an overall view to the diseases and health conditions. In the contrary today we have a specialist for each part of the body for example neurosurgeon or plastic surgeon and each of them can treat their patients with their special knowledge in the best possible way in the way that never a general doctor can. We can expand this to the whole word as that each part of the life needs its specific professional.
Furthermore, another reason which has an inviolable right to be mentioned is that the human life is limited and there is no time to change our way every second. For achieving the successful life we have to concentrate on one thing and learn every aspect of it to get the best results. There is no choice but to be a perfect on one branch rather than be ordinary on so many ones. Brilliant people choose one field and put their whole energy and life to turn to the best on that. For example, in had two best friends back in college. One of them choose the computer field as her special and pursue it until she get her post doctoral degree and now she is one of the most important engineer in the country on her field however my other friend start with computer field and after she get her master degree she change her field to electronic and then mechanics. Although she has adequate knowledge about so many fields, she never could find a appropriate job.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account one can deduce that it is better to specialize in one field rather than have a knowledge of so many fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my stand point is, this world needs spe...
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Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... as her special and pursue it until she get her post doctoral degree and now she is...
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Line 5, column 781, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...start with computer field and after she get her master degree she change her field ...
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Line 5, column 807, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
...and after she get her master degree she change her field to electronic and then mechan...
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Line 5, column 937, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ut so many fields, she never could find a appropriate job. Taking all the afor...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to specialize in one field rather than have a knowledge of so many fields.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60663507109 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54668236523 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1278594188 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264338050496 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813993131508 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889883389055 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193220066203 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986802248284 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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