It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, people always have to make a hard decisions. Most of the people face this issue that lives in hometown or moves from one place to another. Some might be inclined toward the opinion that to have a better life they should take that risk, and others might deem that stability is very necessary for everyone. As far I am concerned, living in different places flourishing humans and make their lives special from people who do not have the courage to do this risks. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that living in other cities helps that to people improve their relationship with other humans from different cultures. They could be familiar with other countries and their cultures. They could be better in their own career, maybe they could be able to start their own business. When someone makes such a hard decision, and move from his hometown, he becomes a more independent person, and become complete. This is a good opportunity to know themselves better than at any time.
For example, my family 20 years ago moved from the countryside to the capital, and I was born in a different city far from my grandparents. They decide to follow their dreams and catch their goals. Now I want to migrate from my country to study and live in a different country. I decide to change my life, and as my parents do this before, follow my dreams. In the future, if I have children, I learn them to a will following their dreams and never give up. I will teach them to fight for their goals because the reasons of our life are noting bot following our dreams.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realized that everyone needs to move in their lives, is very important to make a hard but important decision. Is very necessary to never give up, and in the future be proud of themselves. In fact, there is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
...orld, people always have to make a hard decisions. Most of the people face this issue tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, may, so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61842105263 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57467288082 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6493007439 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3684210526 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18977381274 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570930275315 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462198285319 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112579952382 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199095018051 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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