Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, people have desired to live in societies, because human's personality has been likely to communicate with others. Many people opine that to live in one city in their whole life; however, others claim to move from one place to another. I prefer to move and change my town during my lifetime; I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, changing hometowns provide people many other communities and experiences. In other words, each city has its own beliefs, cultures, and traditional histories, which confront people to many different viewpoints. Additionally, people can utilize other's experiments that they had before, by the way, that having relations and communicating with more people will result in making good friends. My grandparents' experience demonstrates this concept. My grandfather was the only teacher of his area; due to this fact, the educating ministry has sent him to distance location to educate the rural children. They had made many friends in all those places; besides that, they collect many experiments, which have told us every time they came back to our homes.
Moreover, living in many cities helps people to distinguish the best place for inhabiting. As an illustration, cities are various and have a plethora of different features. If people move from one place to another, they will find the best place, which matches their interests and habits. Therefore, people can inhabit there and start a peaceful life without any regrets. Take me for instance; when I started my university, I was required to leave my town and locate in another city, after my graduation I went to another place to do my assistantship, after a while, they transferred me to a foreign country. Finally, based on these exchanges, I have found my attractive city, and I feel perfect here in Toronto. If I had stayed in my hometown, I would not have discovered my best place.
By considering all the previous information, one can conclude that it would be better for people to change their cities during their lifetime. Not only it provides them many others' experiences and good friends, but it also helps them to find their peaceful place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, by the way, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01081081081 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79089095372 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.249114243 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157617651656 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546716857803 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632229348853 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11431663467 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640579689831 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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