Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people stay all their life in a specific city while some others choose to change their living place. Certainly, there exist both pros and cons for each of choices, but I strongly prefer to experience living in different cities rather than to stay in one place all my life. There are three reasons why I subscribe to this opinion which are separately elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, moving to another place will face us with new challenges which eventually improve our abilities. I believe that, after someone decides or is even compelled to move from his safe area to a new and unknown place, he should intensify his efforts to conquer new challenges that may never before he faced. Take a personal experience as an example, after I was accepted in a university in a town very far from my hometown, first I became nervous but during the first year of my residence in the new place, I learned a lot of things that helped me in my future life. I had the chance to see different perspectives about life and rituals.
Moreover, everyone can make good career progress by putting himself in different situations. Obviously, after working several years in a specific environment with stable people, there remain fewer new things to learn. On the flip side, if someone decides to change his workplace especially in another town, there will be new matters that he needs to accommodate. Even if he doesn't change his job and keep the same role, but in a different working culture, it will be highly beneficial.
Finally, I feel that to be stagnant in a city is very boring, so moving would be entertaining. To explain more, people who decide to migrate, afterward say in their memoirs that this challenge was very interesting for them and they never regret it. For instance, one of my colleagues moved to Norway two months ago. I talked to him several times since there, and he always has lots of new things about their cultures, ceremonies, values, and way of life. I can deeply feel his happiness of experiencing such new events, although there are always lots of difficulties. As a result, moving is worth at least trying.
In conclusion, I believe that moving besides its hardness, has big advantages like a personal improvement, career progress, and having new things to discover alongside your lifedays. I suggest everyone does not be afraid of moving, as well as myself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hat he needs to accommodate. Even if he doesnt change his job and keep the same role, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79854368932 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66130455708 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3087444557 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.052631579 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184144352967 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509565824434 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492215251732 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096841477065 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590030096616 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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