Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your an

An adult have lots of responsibility on his/her shoulders towards family, society and nation. A good citizen is one who make contibutions in the society. Similarly, we have to make contributions towards our hometown. I personally believe that it is better to stay in the hometown for our entire lives. There are some reasons to this which I am going to explore in the following essay.

First and foremost, we should be accountable regarding the community in which we have grown up. It is our duty to subscribe in the development and taking care of the city where we have spent our life with parents. I would like to share one example, my father is a very good doctor. He spent his life in the city which now I call my hometown. He did social service by providing free health care for the poor people. I am also looking forward to do something for my home community. Moreover, I believe that, if we will not take care of our place than who is going to do that.

Besides this, our parents need us in their old age. Being in same city is very benefical in taking care of them. My friend moved out of his hometown after getting a job. He is not able to look after his father. Few months back, his father died because of heart-attack, my friend was not present with his father in his last moments. Now, he will regret this all his life. So it is necessary to stay in the native place to take care of parents.

To sum up, I believe that we should not move out of our birth place. By staying their we can do lot of things for people of our community and towards the development of the city.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to doing'.
Suggestion: to doing
... poor people. I am also looking forward to do something for my home community. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33444816054 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45308093365 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.686565895 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7142857143 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2380952381 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157091648725 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050065210653 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617862984481 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113758063126 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533245029166 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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