The knowledge is very important to get successful in the life. More knowledgable you are the more valuable to the society and in turn contributes to the development of the nation. It is a point of consistent debate among the students and the universities management whether the student should focus on major subject or should take other subjects too in order to enhance their knowldege. I personally believe that specilaization in the major subject is more important than to have broad knowledge of many subjects. There are certain reasons to it, few of them I going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, a student spend very limited time in the university, that time should be utilized in the studies of the major subject. The knowledge of the major subject will help in the future to get the desired job and also to do the job efficiently. This time should not be wasted in doing the studies of the other academic subjects which may not prove to be useful in the job related work. For example, if the student who is doing medical studies, takes french language as an extra subject to enhance his knowledge. Then he will end up styding the extra subject more, as the subject is new to him and he may face difficulty in understanding it. Thus, the student is wasting his precious time which should be devoted in the study of the medical subjects by studying the subject which may prove irrelevent to him in his carrer.
Besides this, the student should be given the freedom of choice to decide whether he has time to take more subjects or not. The students who don't have practical classes may have time to take some subjects besides the major one. For example, the students from arts department do not have any practical classes so they may have time to enhance their knowledge by taking other academic subjects. But, again this depends on the free will of the student enroll in other courses.
Lastly, the students are already under pressure of doing well in the main subjects, taking more courses will increase their problem. They have to prepare well for the exams in order to have a bright future, by taking more subjects they may not be able to score good marks in either of the subjects. I mean to say that neither they will score good in the specialized subject nor in the extra course taken by them.
In a nutshell, though gaining knowledge is good but at the cost of major subject is not justifiable. Therefore, students should specialize in the specific subject rather than trying to broaden their knowledge by taking many other subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71840354767 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51190448882 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436807095344 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2815264073 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285678231772 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101255773656 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642110972028 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182204182126 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506799826539 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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