In today's modern society, everyone in the city become so busy doing tasks like job, school, and business. Day after day people become more and more stressed, so they need to do something to relax themselves from daily hectic activities. Some people watch movie and read books to relax. Other prefer to do exercise to release from stress. In my concern, doing exercise is the better way to relax.
First, doing exercise can make people not only feel relax, but also feel happy, satisfied good appearance and good mood. While doing exercise such as jogging or stretching human body stimulates various brain chemicals that may leave a person feeling happier and more relaxed. A person may also feel better about her appearance and herself when you exercise regularly, which can boost confidence. For instance, according to one research of Biochemistry, study saw that people who exercise twice, are more happier and more positive in attitude rather than those who don't exercise at all. However, some people have different view point, they feel relaxed while watching movies and reading books. Albeit those kind of activities are entertaining but it give temporary happiness and last for short time. On other hand, doing exercise boost energy, gifted good mood and happiness, and develop positive attitude for life long.
Secondly, along with relaxation, doing exercise also provide some good quality of sleep which people hardly get from movie or by reading book. By doing exercise, a person may feel tired but relaxed. From my own experience, when I was in college, I had long vacation about two month. In starting days I was so excited because watching movies and reading books was my favorite time pass and I felt so relaxed. Few weeks later, I could hardly sleep at night and even if when I slept, the endless nightmares woke me up. So my parents took me to our family physician to cure my problem. The physician told me that I carry too much pressure and I needed to be relax and the best way to get relax is doing exercise rather than watching movies or reading books. I started following his instruction. Finally, I could sleep well at night and have the energy to do my work.
To sum up, doing exercise not only give happiness and good mood but also provide good quality of sleep and boost energy in human body. So it is perfect way to get relax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...saw that people who exercise twice, are more happier and more positive in attitude rather th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...itive in attitude rather than those who dont exercise at all. However, some people h...
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Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...d of activities are entertaining but it give temporary happiness and last for short ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...velop positive attitude for life long. Secondly, along with relaxation, doing e...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... college, I had long vacation about two month. In starting days I was so excited beca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80098280098 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37914226164 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3887847635 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9565217391 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284337641441 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916802915687 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777021953349 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177107741675 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765396486441 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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