Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by watching TV or reading a book
than by doing physical exercise. Use reasons and examples to develop your response.
Without a shadow of a doubt, In the given hectic life, in which people are invariably occupied with various concerns, their leisure time exerts a tremendous influence on their lives. An unanswered question in this area is that whether expanding this time on activities such as watching Tv or reading a book is a more advantageous approach or doing a physical workout. Despite all the arguments asserting that relaxing time should not involve physical exercise, and it is intended to satisfy humans' slothfulness, I agree with the questions' statement, maintaining that exercising is far superior. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
First and foremost, accomodating physical training through relaxing time in ones' dominant lifestyle seeds the plants of a well-organized person in tandem with excellent habits. As a matter of fact, these trivial resting periods are decisive factors in both forming long-term habits and orienting humans' mindsets. In other words, when a person gets accustomed to doing physical activities in a determined time in a day, this spontaneously affects the brain to order its tasks, and therefore, it makes the person complete everything chronologically in respect of the brains' priority. Activities such as watching Tv or reading a book, on the other hand, can become addictive due to their enormously time-consuming natures, and form destructive habits in the long run. As a result, someone can remain behind their schedule and do not get to pass all the tasks which are assigned to. By way of illustration, consider a student goes for a walk. This student knows how to manage their time in comparison to another student who spends a substantial amount of time reading a novel since the latter student is eager to find out the end of the book and so unintentionally continues it regardless of the time.
Another reason to be mentioned is that exercising has far-reaching effects on the quality of life and making it more enthusiastic, besides
its tremendous implication on preventing a myriad of diseases. As it is evident, doing any kind of physical activity increases ones' vigor, then this energy accumulates, and it will help the person be happier. In addition, exercising prohibits many illnesses such as heart attack, stroke, and obesity in particular. On the contrary, sitting on a chair or sofa at home and watching Tv not only does not have merits but also might result in gaining weight by eating. For example, consider a juvenile running in the park. It is unlikely that this young girl gets involved with varied diseases stem from being dormant, yet, the one who is sleeping on a bed and eating ice cream while reading her book is vulnerable to them.
Reflecting upon all reasons mentioned above, one soon realizes that spending time on physical activities is far better than sitting in the home and either watching Tv or reading a book on two grounds that first, it helps in forming a well-oriented mindset and fine habits, and second, it makes life more vigorous and also preserves the body from many diseases.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'questions'' or 'question's'?
Suggestion: questions'; question's
...y humans slothfulness, I agree with the questions statement, maintaining that exercising ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sical training through relaxing time in ones dominant lifestyle seeds the plants of ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
...thing chronologically in respect of the brains priority. Activities such as watching T...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...any kind of physical activity increases ones vigor, then this energy accumulates, an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in particular, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07976653696 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91846756905 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550583657588 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7484670969 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.055555556 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.45110844103 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217967543316 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059151892356 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508974949729 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120411483084 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416043176436 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'questions'' or 'question's'?
Suggestion: questions'; question's
...y humans slothfulness, I agree with the questions statement, maintaining that exercising ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sical training through relaxing time in ones dominant lifestyle seeds the plants of ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
...thing chronologically in respect of the brains priority. Activities such as watching T...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...any kind of physical activity increases ones vigor, then this energy accumulates, an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in particular, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07976653696 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91846756905 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550583657588 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7484670969 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.055555556 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.45110844103 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217967543316 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059151892356 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508974949729 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120411483084 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416043176436 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.