Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by watching TV or reading a book than by doing physical exercise. Use reasons and examples to develop your response
In this hectic life, all human being sometimes feel beaten down, get tired, and so on in all of which they need to make their mind refresh. Individuals depend on their personalities, and life styles choose some specific ways to do so, watching TV, reading book and physical exercising are most common among them. Even though some are of the opinion that reading books or watching movies among the above-mentioned specific activities are more beneficial choices, but, I, personally, subscribe to this idea that exercising is a better one. It not only gives us a great chance to get relaxed, but also brings us many secondaries advantageous like happiness and good friendships.
In first place, as all we know, our bodies secrete some hormones that make our mental conditions effectively different. These hormones are some biomaterials all of which carry some specific impact on our bodies like serotonin that contributes to feel well-being and happiness. Individuals' mind's conditions can improve through such biological events in their bodies, even they are unaware about this metabolism when they are exercising. It is not to mention that this process definitely turn our tired spirits, anxious mind to name but a few into an energetic condition full of sense of live. For instance, I used to be a depression person because of my busy life, even always I was reading books in my leisure times. I didn’t get relaxedation, so accordingly my negative emotions in various situations accumulated on top of each other. In the contrast, from 3 years ago, I started exercising instead of reading books in sometimes of my free times. After a while, I see some extraordinary changing in my mental condition which was a great gift of such an activity and following relaxation.
Secondly, having good relationships with others is very profitable for everyone that they can get relaxed and fill calm by them. It is crystal clear among people that they can find real friends when they do exercise like when they are in a gym. Such viewpoints had their rooted in their previous experiences or hearing from their around people. Considering this, exercising is a priceless choice to make ourselves relax. We can change the condition that crush our souls to a peaceful one via exercising, its resulted friendships and following our fresh mind. For instance, in my past exercising gym, I got familiar with an amazing person who is now my best friend. I can really say that I wasn’t able to find such a beyond the price friend in any other places. We have a lot to do with each other that help both of us to make our lives happy. We not only do exercise at the same time to have fresh time but also our relationship is unbelievable useful to meet such a goal; being relaxed, happy and calm in our hectic lives.
In summary, by taking all of these into account, I think exercising cannot be comparable with all other activities chosen by individuals to get relaxed and calm because of its amazing impacts on our minds and relationships. No one in his or right mind cannot deny happiness, peaceful life and the outstanding friendships come from exercising.
- whether or not have to correct others mistakes especially ones of their teacher or meeting leaders 73
- it is more important to keep old friends than make new friends 70
- extinction of giant Steller's sea cow 88
- book aren't need any more 73
- the specific dinosaur lived in North Slope, Edmontosausus, one hundred million years ago 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90280373832 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83679330921 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515887850467 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 832.5 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4406650935 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.043478261 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113236075786 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344601950981 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429018141478 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710032866109 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367573488728 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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