Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Research is the vast field, doing it is not any easy task and it requires a lot of studies. It is important for the growth of youself and country and it does not matter from where you study, but it must be authentic. Studies by books and printed material needs more hardwork than internet. In followinf essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, for research all books are available on internet and for books you do not need to go to shops all you need is a computer. All research can be done by sitting at home. For example, when I was in university our teacher assigned us a research assignment on type 2 diabeties and gave us only two weeks. At first, I was so worried how we will do it although it was group of 7 persons than my senior told me that we can open all journals and articles online which really helped me and we did our project within 6 days. Thus, this example elucidates that new technology are very helpful.
Secondly, the books you need can be buy on internet but sometimes there are numerous website which are scam and can empty the accountand and people upload the books which are not authentic. For instance, in school I wrote my research paper and that paper will be graded in my final examination but unfortunately the reference I choose on internet was fake and my whole project became worthless because of the unauthentic reference. Therefore, this instance illustrate that online studies are effective but needs to be rechecked.
To wrap up, in my opinion research is very delicate studies and a little wrong step can waste all efforts that you put in it and after online studies you can print all the selected material that is needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52698412698 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5114020661 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3404472309 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164784446175 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625297677242 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484722082593 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108695417878 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434829024319 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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