Technology has constantly been improving our living standards. It facilitates most part of our lives. Gaining information has been changed with the invention of the internet. Before the internet, people used traditional sources such as printed books and articles. Today, the internet has various advantages such as easy and expeditious access to information and including broad contents. I am going to explain these advantages in the following paragraphs from my point of view.
First of all, the most important advantage of the internet is that it provides easy and quick access to information. Previous to the internet, people had to go to libraries or different places to gain information or do research. But today, they can access to great amount of pieces of information from their houses by sipping their coffees. They just need to type a few words on Google and all information is one click away. So, they spend less time than before for doing research by using the internet. I am going to exemplify this with my own experience. When I was at the university, I had to do my final project and I needed a lot of sources. I cannot imagine how it would be if the internet had not existed. I did not go anywhere and spent less time to compile all the information what I needed.
Secondly, another advantage of the internet is that it includes boundless information. Most printed books can easily be found on the internet as an electronic book. Today, many people use electronic devices to read books because these devices provide the opportunity to carry a lot of books without bothering. Moreover, the internet is able to store millions or billions of books, articles or different sources and they are available to the public. Therefore, people prefer to use it and are able to reach different kinds of sources which have not printed and find more what they want to.
Thirdly, when you want to learn or search for something, you have to read the whole book but, by using the internet, you can find what exactly you want. In addition, if some information is proved wrong, it is very easy to change it on the internet in a few seconds but it may take so long to change it on the books. Using the internet is also beneficial for the brain. It is very interesting that according to scientists, searching on the web or scanning the information improves brain capacity far more than reading books and is similar to completing puzzles.
To sum up, the internet is better than books or articles to do research because it allows people to get more information quickly as well as other benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78888888889 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72095208464 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491111111111 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8876535677 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274551007805 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755427085429 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747835352648 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162767992894 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017354021068 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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