Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet.
Doing research is very important in everyone's academic career. One of the most essential parts of a research is reading essays and books. I think it's better to use internet and electronic books for this purpose because of a few reasons that is discussed in the following.
First, I think using internet for searching about a topic is very easy and comfortable. Because if you want to do research in a library using printed material like books and articles would require you to survey dozens of them, and surveying each of them will take a few minutes, and that would be a lot of time totally and then you will only have a few related books that you will need to study deeper, and it will require even more time. But if you use the internet you only have to type your subject, and hundreds of related articles and e-books will be ready to use. For example I once went to a library near my home to do a research about periodic table for college, and I got confused with the amount of books and other stuff there, and after searching among them for a few hours I could only find a few books related to the topic and none of them came into use for the research. So I think using internet can save us a lot of time and it's better to do it.
Second, if you have to carry the printed materials with yourself, that will be a hard task to do. Obviously, books weigh a lot and you cannot carry many of them with yourself. But if you have something like a smart phone or tablet with yourself, you can simply save many books in them and you will be able to use them whenever and wherever you want. For instance, I remember I was doing a research in one of the college's labs which took me about two months to complete it. I had to carry a few books almost every day with myself, because I was very busy with that research and I had to work on it both in the lab and in home, and after several weeks I started to feel pain in my back and knees. I had to visit my doctor for the problem and the treatment took a lot of time, almost six months.
So I think it's much easier to use internet and electronic material for doing research because it is quicker and easier. I suggest that all researchers stop using books and printed materials and try to use electronic devices and the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23623853211 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26401474653 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428899082569 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2733392038 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396562136802 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153018617573 0.076458572812 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818551185556 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279511860093 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608977107786 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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