Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In academics whether it is undergraudate, graudate or doctoral level the one of the most
important part of curriculum is research or thesis papers. Personally, I also deals with
certain reserach works. Some people believe that it is better to use printed material such as
books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. However I disagree with this
because of some compelling reasons that came from my personal experiences which are as
following.
To begin with, Internet is source of unlimited resources. Compared to the books or article it
has vast amount of valid and true informations. Book and articles has limited information
because authors are bound to certain limit and they only chooses limited amount of information
which can be able to fit in bounded pages. For instance, I remember last semester when I was
writing research thesis on physics of Black hole I refered articles and books on black holes
however I stucked on certain point and were not able to find any new information from any books
that were available to me. So, I decided to have a look through internet and I was able to find
valid and worthy points that I could add to my thesis from it. Morever, I got latest
information about space agencies that tried works related to my thesis which were not even
printed in any books or articles.
Second, the space is big concerned for books and articles its not case with internet materials.
As everyone knows the reserach requires extensive studies of information and to handle this
information is big task. I remember when my professor and I were doing research on Deep Space
exploration since we studied so many articles and books we made a heap of books in his cabin
that no space was left in his cabin and because of this we also found ourselves in big trouble
during time of final draft since we were not able to figure out book to refer from so many. But
if we had used Internet we could found same materials and able to find fast refeernce because
we could able to bookmark that particular part and space were also not problem because by
internet one can access can any article or book through any portable devices like personal
computer, tablet and were able to manage refernces quickly.
In sum, from my personal experience and internet's ability to serve as unlimited source to any
topic I would prefer to use internet in my research work rather than books or articles.
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... through internet and I was able to find valid and worthy points that I could add...
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...my thesis from it. Morever, I got latest information about space agencies that tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92723004695 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53627716247 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476525821596 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7771697585 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.933333333 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233537245859 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953760297324 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131076937395 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718888686292 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102368036623 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.