Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Earth has given everything from food to clothes and without the resources that is provided by our "Mother earth" no living beings can survive. Some people believe that earth is being damaged by human activities while some feel our activites makes earth a better place to live. However, I agrees that we have greatly damaged the earth by our activities because of the two important reasons.
To begin with, we humans have destroyed the earth's natural beauty. We started using natural resources available from earth in great amount of quantities and destroying it's flora and fauna. For an instance, last year in kerala, India which is my home state Government cut off the forest part aproximately of 15km to build a highway to connect kerala with nearby state, Tamilnadu. During this process, many trees were cut down reducing the scenic beauty of kerala, as it is known for it's greenery. Other example is of building bridge on the river of tapi. Although the river is small it's view was soothing and aesthetic many of my friends and I use to visit that place to feel like we were close to nature but on construction of that bridge the view is diminished and we now feel that the river had lost it's beauty.
Second, because of our greediness to earn and make more money we have destory the habitats of many other species and that lead to change in ecosystem of our surrounding. For example, during the construction of above mentioned highway so that trade between state can be speed up many animals lost ther habitat, the unique breed of cows were use to live and produces there because they use to get there food easily. Morever, the lions living in that forest use to prey on this cows. However, the decline in popuation of cows this year also giving sign in malnutrition cubs of lions because they are not getting food. If the measures are not taken then there will be huge unstability in ecosystem of this area.
In sum it's responsibility of every human to save mother earth so that she continues to give resources for sustainability of human and other animals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ions because they are not getting food. If the measures are not taken then there w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73829201102 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50918975162 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550964187328 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7667339873 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261912539037 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958803654331 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1219189601 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172814741825 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113323981084 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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