Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days by the development of technology, using the internet become common in all researches. Some people prefer to use paper for their projects. However, others like to use the internet for that.in my point of view the internet is a better way to use because of the following reasons.
First of all, by using the internet, the consumption of paper reduces so we can cut down fewer trees annually. Trees have a vital function on earth because they transform carbon dioxide into oxygen that is vital gas for human life. So it’s so important to protect them. Following research in last year in Tehran university, the number of trees which have cut down since ten years ago rise up. They also measured the amount of carbon dioxide during a year and figured out an alarming increase in the average amount in comparison with ten years ago and they believe it has a direct relationship with cutting trees. So we have to decrease cutting trees and one of the most effective ways for this aim is using less paper.
Furthermore, the internet accelerates our works because of its easy access. We can find any books or sources on the internet in a second. While we have to spend hours to buy a paper source. For example, last semester I wanted a book for my final exam. I bought the book online but my roommate who used to read paper sources went out of campus to buy it. he probably spent three hours to found and bought it even he wanted to order it, take more time than downloading it.so we can save time by using the internet in our projects.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that using the internet is more useful than using paper because the internet accelerates our tasks and we can protect the environment by using the internet because we can cut fewer trees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or sources on the internet in a second. While we have to spend hours to buy a paper s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60252365931 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44170151294 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.365085303 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223412798305 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783030773058 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071792522546 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171538329463 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763525044626 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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