do you agree or disagree whit the following statement: workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than they have to do similar tasks all day long.
People spend a noticeable part of their time at work. It’s an inevitable fact that work is one of the major parts of their life so we should spend this time as profitable as we can to feel satisfaction. people have different views about work. Some of them believe that we have to do many tasks during workdays. However, others prefer just to do one task during a day. In my idea, we feel more satisfaction when we do a lot of tasks because of the following reasons.
First of all, doing a lot of tasks makes us fresher and more satisfied. while concentrating on just one work can be boring for us. Our mind tends to do a variety of tasks rather than doing just one task. For instance, last year I was hired in a factory and I should check the products in the first station. If it was suitable, I would pass them to the next station. At first, it seems a suitable work. However, after a few days, I could not stand it and I never went there because that repetitious work annoyed me. I had to watch a thousand goods during a day that was so boring. I never satisfied whit that works.
Furthermore, doing a variety of tasks make us creative. When we deal whit some work or problem we have to evaluate all possible solutions for that work after that we have to make the best decision. In contrast, when we face whit a problem or task, we don’t have many choices. For example, I found a job recently which I should design some mechanical parts like shafts, bearings, and gears. So during the day, I face a variety of problems like which material should I use, which software is better for designing them, which method is more affordable. So I have to think to find answers to all these questions that cause raise my creativity.
In conclusion, doing many tasks during a workday is more suitable for workers because it enhances their creativity and helps them to feel the freshness and make them more satisfied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4447592068 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5100077359 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495750708215 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9949855833 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3181818182 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0454545455 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316522438341 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102773730311 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996104782398 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209027250495 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222758937064 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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